Six Sentence Sunday: Baby, it's hot outside

This week, Alice waits outside, in high summer, for her bus. It's hotter'n hell, a thing that a chatty technologically savvy fallen angel would know a lot about. Well, of course he would.

When her phone vibrated against her hip, it felt a little like a sizzle, which made her think of bacon, naturally. Alice slipped the phone out of her pocket and touched the message icon.

Hellion10: You’re hot.

Dearlingerer: Clearly you have me confused with the bacon.

Hellion10: I do not. Shall I perform a taste test?


Happy summer, folks. Stay cool and read hot: Six Sentence Sunday.

52 comments:

Gem Sivad said...

Hellion 10 sounds like he's hot. Intriguing six!

Sarah Grimm said...

Love this. And I believe the answer to his question is a resounding Yes!

Jessica Subject said...

I agree with Gem. Anxious to find out more. :)

Liz said...

tee hee...fun play on words and a very nice six!
Liz

Jayel Kaye said...

love the playful banter.

Cara Bristol said...

Taste test...funny. Fun six.

readmoore.com said...

I get that a lot...always getting confused with the bacon. Great six!

Jean said...

Love the taste test and the bacon reference! Is she as tasty as bacon? I guess he'll find out! Love to know more, great six!!

Rebecca Royce said...

Really made me grin. Nice work.

Lisa Fox said...

HA! I love it!

Alix said...

That was just plain old GREAT!

Heather Thurmeier said...

Great six. I love the back and forth between them. Now I want to know where this conversation goes!

Liia Ann White said...

HA! This made me lol like a crazy person ;-)
Nicely done.

Sherry Gloag said...

:-) Love it. And from what I hear, very appropriate right now. I gather the tempratures are climbig across the Pond

Dee Carney said...

lol. Very cute exchange!

Sandra Sookoo said...

LOL love the snippet!

Graylin Fox said...

I think the taste test is a good idea. With some of that cologne to help things along.

Bree said...

lol! Yummy six! He can taste my bacon any day!

ursulawhistler.com said...

Aww, Yeah! Taste test. Great six.

Cate Masters said...

Love this premise! A hellion angel who texts - especially such yummy messages. Sizzling!

Kathleen Grieve said...

This was Fabulous text dialogue! LOL I bet this is a fun one to write, too!

Bonni Sansom said...

Yummy love me a taste test. Hot six, really!

Laura Kaye said...

LOL very funny!

Sam Crescent said...

Lol, Loved your six

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

LOL! Very fun banter. Love their voices.

Nichelle Gregory said...

Who doesn't like a taste test! Fun six!

wearegoingonawitchhunt said...

Do the test!! Loved the flirty banter.

E. P. Beaumont said...

Sizzle and a sense of humor: very nice.

Gracen Miller said...

Love these six! Left me wanting more!

Huggles,
Gracen

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Great six! I love the texting!

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Mmmm. Now I want bacon LOL. Great Six

Lex Valentine said...

I just had maple bacon. But I wouldn't mind some Hellion10. LOL

murdersandmysteries said...

Love the dialogue. So natural and easy going

Karysa Faire said...

And I never knew that bacon could be sexy! Very interesting food-play. :-)

Randi Alexander said...

That was good! Very cute - and sexy!

Jessica K said...

Wow! He means business! I hope they can find an air-conditioned place. :)

1000th.monkey said...

...somehow this makes me think of Pavlov's dog... instead of salivating at the bell ring, the phone makes her think of bacon... strange, but intriguing.

Lorien Velez said...

Oh yum! A playful and sexy scene. :)

Sandy Nachlinger said...

I love the sizzling bacon! Clever and fun six.

Lauri J Owen said...

Very cute - and original. Great six.

Avril Ashton said...

I like. Simple, original, and funny.

Sonya Clark said...

Very cute and funny, I especially like the last line!

lizculver said...

Great character interaction - by text - or near sext even!

kimfaulks said...

Very nice writing. I loved it and want to read more.

Cassandra Carr said...

Awesome! And I lurve bacon!

laynap said...

LOL Love it!

Stacey said...

Hmmm, I want to know more. Great six!

Elaine Cantrell said...

Nice banter between them. Nice six.

Rawiya said...

Ah nice Six. I love it!

Pippa Jay said...

Hehehehe, does he take ketchup with that? :-P

Lucy Felthouse said...

Hehe, like the humour in this six, well done!

Kallypso Masters said...

Oh, yeah! Great six!